I love firstly that Darryn's wearing a tank-top and that it seems to be riding up and showing his tummy. This is a thing I very much approve of.
(also, hand tattoos! I love that you got them in there <3 )
But I really LOVE how Rynos looks! Oh god, he's so adorable hiding against his daddy and under his hair. I love the way you captured his braid too, that is exactly how I imagine it and I'm so glad you captured it without any references.
Ugh I adore this picture. You've captured such a lovely little moment. And I love Darryn's derpy smile. He loves his shy baby. (Shame he doesn't stay that way)
It's gorgeous, Misty! Darryn looks especially wonderful and the kindness is his eyes comes across so nicely. Little Rynos looks adorable too hiding his face like that and you did so well with the description I gave you! (He grows up to be a standoffish jerk, but at least he was a cute baby, right?) I love his little cheeks and his soft hair. You are just so talented! I hope you get a ton of other commissions from these, I bet everyone who sees them wants one of their own!